Kia ora Harper,
I really like your summer poem because I also love and miss summer. You have described summer so well using the words sunset, swimming, relaxing and joy. It makes me visualise myself walking along the beach in the warm evenig sun watching the sunset.
You have also presented your poem well, with a great picture of a kitten and a good sized text so I can read the poem.
Keep up the great work. I look forward to reading more of your work you share onto your blog.
Whaea Donna
Kia ora Harper,
I really like your summer poem because I also love and miss summer. You have described summer so well using the words sunset, swimming, relaxing and joy. It makes me visualise myself walking along the beach in the warm evenig sun watching the sunset.
You have also presented your poem well, with a great picture of a kitten and a good sized text so I can read the poem.
Keep up the great work. I look forward to reading more of your work you share onto your blog.
Whaea Donna